Thursday, September 23, 2010

はじめまして

はじめまして、りダブンです。

かんぼじあじんです。

わたしはだいがくのいちねんせえです。

せんもんはせいぶつがくです。

どうぞよろしくおねがします。

3 comments:

  1. Good try!! There are a few minor mistakes. I will correct them in next class. I appreciate your effort.

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  2. okay, i think i corrected everything. :)

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  3. You used Hiragana "ri" for your name. You should use Katakana "ri." You should also use Katakana for Cambodia (カンボジア).

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